T2+Narratives

__ Thursday 9th June __

This is our prior knowledge of metaphors displayed as a wordle document

Similes are compering two things that are unlike things using as and like Metaphors are comparisons of two unlike things without using signal words such as as Like As

22 Topic: Identifying Similes Directions: Complete the simile by filling in the blank. 1. The car was as dirty as a muddy dog 2. The candy was lik e a big taffy __3. His hands were as big as____.__ bigfoot __4. My little brother sounds like__ a fog horn __5. My room is as messy as__ __.__ as my dogs fur __6. School is like__. hell's kitchen 7. The chair was as hard as a __.__ rock __8. Her hair looked like__. frankenstin 9. The monster’s breath was like. an oger 10. The water was as cold as. antartica 11. My lunch tasted like. rubbish 12. The rabbit was as soft as __. buuny __

__ Metaphors __ __Metaphors are imaginative ways to describe something by__ __comparing that thing to something else. For example, if I__ __wanted to say that Dan is tall, I could say that Dan is a giant.__

__Use a metaphor to describe somebody who is:__

__tall in between jack in the bean stock__ __kind but nice__ __fast__ __slow__ __smart__ __fat__ __sneaky__ __angry__ __beautiful__ __ugly__ __stubborn__ __short__ __thin__ __silly__ __scared easily__ __He is a giant.__ __She is an angle__ __WEBSITE FOR RIMUS NARRATIVE STORY __ __ []  __

Tuesday 14th june 2011 __Whole class__

__ LI we are learning to use personification and alliteration in our writing __

__Personification__

__giving a nonliving object like a tree a human characteristics__

__A beach ball gets arms and legs and starts playing volleyball__

__the wind whispered past my ears__

__the thunder growed at me__

__the clouds bursted into tears__



__Tuesday 28 June__

To write your own narrative I have attached some worksheets that you will need to put into your own wiki. Don't forget this is the structure of a narrative and helps make it interesting!!

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__Wednesday 29 June__

Upon the land far far away there once was a family of evil super villains and a proud family of super hero’s but one Monday morning a villain named Melon Gaga Pickle saw to get revenge on the hero who killed his family Then the next day.Melon Gaga Pickle packed his gears so that he could get his revenge then fighting for his revenge he yelled out ‘I’m Ready world’ So he packed up his gears Once again and headed off to get his revenge

Four Months later

At least we meet again said Melon Gaga Pickle I agree said Captain Tree Man but “I belief you are going down this time said Melon Gaga Pickle”

The battle begins they both clash with their fierce weapons “Oh no melon gaga Pickle is falling” at a very fast pace and it looks like Captain Tree man is Following him.Sorry but it looks like you will never be able to get your revenge On my family Melon Gaga Pickle said Captain tree man.

Melon Gaga Pickle get’s out his POWERFUL SWORD right before Captain Tree Man was about to incinerate him to death.“Not today” Said Melon Gaga Pickle As he slashes Captain Tree Man’s Flamethrower into little pieces of shards He was able to take out one of Captain Tree Man’s Weapons But will it go on

No it shall not continue “well why don’t we make this a bit more interesting” said Captain Tree Man I agree said Melon Gaga Pickle so they both got up walked away from each other and quickly turned bak and ran toward each other for another battle but it look’s like Melon Gaga Pickle is to tired from battling in the first battle also Captain Tree Man is a bit tired to so will they keep fighting or will one of them fall

As they run towards each other they both get out there weapons yet again and the battle just keeps getting better and better “CLASH” It seems like the power that they were putting in there battle has sent each other flying across 5 meters back

As they both clash with tremendous strength the civilians run to leave the battle zone “AHHHHH” run for our lives. Both melon Gaga Pickle and Captain Tree Man are still going back for more action they just keep getting stronger and stronger each time but.it looks like they are very injured will they continue or shall they retreat.Whats this it seem’s like Melon Gaga Pickle has injured his arm while fighting but it also look’s like Captain Tree Man has injured his leg so do they choose to continue or flee

Two weeks later

While been out of the battle field for at least two weeks Captain Tree Man and Melon Gaga Pickle both continue on their training so they can see who will be the Strongest fighter will it be Melon Gaga Pickle so he can finally get his revenge on all tree’s that have ever lived or will it be Captain Tree Man who want’s to be proud of his family.jurying their Fierce battle training melon Gaga Pickle was taking a break and saw a black and Golden shiny pair of twin daggers Just lying on the ground Melon Gaga Pickle said“hmmm I wonder who these nice pair of twin daggers belong to

They belong to me yelled the black smith those daggers belong to me

But why were they just lying there on the ground said Melon Gaga Pickle

I seem’s that I had missed placed them when I was look for a Nice place to camp out for the night.Tell you what I am getting a little bit hungry if you can go and hunt down some food I will give you those daggers for free said the black smith

“hmmm” I do want those nice black and Golden pair of twin daggers

But the question is how bad do you want those daggers

Ok you have a deal I’l go get you some food and I’l get those daggers

Ok good

One Hour Later

While melon Gaga Pickle is taking back food for the black smith

Captain Tree Man is still working on his training so that Captain Tree Man does not let Melon Gaga Pickle succeed in his quest to get REVENGE on all the tree’s That ever lived

Five minutes later

“Black smith Black smith I’v found some food for you”

Well done Melon Gag Pickle as I promised I will give you those shiny dagges I promised you

Thanks Black smith now these shiny daggers will really help me get revenge on all the tree’s that ever lived all right mr Black smith from here we say good bye for now

Indeed we shall say good bye

Twenty minutes later

Melon Gaga Pickle get’s back to training

In them mean while

Captain tree man takes a break from training all morning straight

While Captain Tree Man is taking a break he is trying to fix his flamethrower

Will it be ready in time well Captain Tree Man packs up his gear’s Once again and hopefully the last Time

At the end of Melon Gaga Pickle’s training he pack’s his bag’s makes sure he has his brand new black and Golden shiny daggers that have never been fought with in real combat before in real life.

Five Hours Later

At last we meet again Captain Tree Man yes and this will be the last time I agree Melon Gaga Pickle let’s fight Bring it on said Melon Gaga Pickle At Last the final show down between Melon Gaga Pickle and Captain Tree Man Is about to start who will win this fight Begin the fight begins at a speed of 200 miles per hour from a hundred meters back While running they both grab there POWERFUL SWORDS and slash them as they Clash not Bad said Captain Tree man

Not to bad yourself said Melon Gaga Pickle

But think you can handle my new “BLACK AND GOLDEN SHINY PAIR OF TWIN DAGGERS.”

Well, can you handle my splinter gun said Captain Tree Man

Well, let’s see shall we

We shall once again their start running towards each other for the final battle and as Captain Tree Man is shooting splinter’s Melon Gaga Pickle Join’s his Daggers together to make a defending sword while spinning it he has deflected Captain Tree Man’s splinters and takes them off and continues to run and it looks like Captain Tree Man is falling on no what’s this Melon Gaga Pickle carves a X on Captain Tree Man’s body warning people that Captain Tree Man is dead and that Melon Gaga Pickle has got his revenge but what will happen next.

Two years later.

As the world is in crisis all because of Melon Gaga Pickle the civilians are being hold hostage and some have been working as slaves and making Melon Gaga Pickle their leader If there were ever to betray him they would go to the dungeon for eternity And him they broke the words of trust Melon Gaga Pickle would kill them with his Black and Golden twin pair’s of Daggers and slice their heads off on the spot while being hold up in the air with chains hanging from the roof of his empire

So did his slaves ever betray Melon Gaga Pickle well let’s hope they don’t or you know what will happen.

During those two years Melon Gaga Pickle had the power to change the city name to hippyMelon Town Will Melon Gaga Pickle be Taken Down or will hippy Melon Town continue to be in chaos.

To Be Continued…

My Learning Target

My next step. Focus on one minute of your story. Choose the fight scene and describe it. Describe you characters and tell the reader what they look like, sound like etc

I will achieve this by: Using your senses to the scene and describing what it looks like, sounds like, feels like. Using language resources - similes, metaphors, personification. Don’t forget to have a problem, peak and then a resolution.

Date achieved/signed

Reflection i have learnt that i need to pay attention during writing because I end up doing some work at the last minute